Great storytelling and cinematography – I love to see a complete piece! Well thought through to completion.
Appears a bit dark on youtube – have a look.
Wing animation needs a lot of work. Very robotic and not very animal like
Cut the static hold at the end out
Compositing:
The psychedelic affect feel tacked on top to me – you should animate them with the camera movement to make them more integrated
The camera is much too still when the wings come out – keep the camera shake consistent
Color and lighting on the wings looks good – they are too sharp and perfect and they should be casting a subtle drop shadow onto your body. (Can be done in nuke)
Tracking and Roto:
The wing to body tracking needs a lot more work – try and lock it down in post from a chest track.
General:
ReplyDeleteGreat storytelling and cinematography – I love to see a complete piece! Well thought through to completion.
Appears a bit dark on youtube – have a look.
Wing animation needs a lot of work. Very robotic and not very animal like
Cut the static hold at the end out
Compositing:
The psychedelic affect feel tacked on top to me – you should animate them with the camera movement to make them more integrated
The camera is much too still when the wings come out – keep the camera shake consistent
Color and lighting on the wings looks good – they are too sharp and perfect and they should be casting a subtle drop shadow onto your body. (Can be done in nuke)
Tracking and Roto:
The wing to body tracking needs a lot more work – try and lock it down in post from a chest track.
The roto around the body needs a lot more work.